Screenwriting/Script Consultation & Editing

“I am hugely impressed.  What you have written reflects the time and energy you have invested.  Your comments have been consistently insightful.  Thank you for all your contributions.  It has been a great pleasure!” – Cai Emmons, 2003 Ken Kesey Award Winner

Andrew Murga has a Bachelor in Screenwriting from the University of Oregon, has written dozens of short and feature length screenplays, and has been offering script consultation and editing for several years.

$100 for Features (scripts longer than 120 pages +$5 per page)

$50 for Shorts (scripts between 30-45 pages +$2 per page, scripts longer than 45 pages considered features)

Consultations Include:

  • Editing for Grammar, Spelling, Screenplay Format & Structure, etc.
  • Detailed Feedback on Title & Concept/Premise (two of the most important aspects of selling your script)
  • Detailed Feedback on Characters (Depth, Back-Story, Development, Story Arch/Hero’s Journey, Wants, Needs, Desires, Fears, Motivations, etc.)
  • Detailed Feedback on Plot (Structure, Efficiency, Pace/Flow, Scene Structure, Scene Points, Inciting Incident, Rising Action, Dark Night of the Soul, Climax, Resolution, etc.)
  • Detailed Feedback on Dialogue (Realistic Sound, Emotional Impact, Humorous vs. Hurtful, On-the-Nose vs. Direct, Depth of Subtext, etc.)
  • Feedback on Script Killers (how sellable your script is to a producer regarding Copyrights/Trademarks, Budget, Marketing, Target Audience, Distribution, etc.)
  • Outline on Revision Suggestions (regarding ALL aspects of your script)
  • Feedback on Outline, Treatment, Loglines, Query Letters, Pitches, etc. (+$50 Additional Fee)
  • Expedited 2-3 Day Turnaround (+$50 Additional Fee)

On the fence?  Read this article about whether script consultations are right for you.

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